Yes, the Rail 9.8 takes a coil happily — plenty of owners have done exactly this, and the consensus on here is it's one of the better upgrades you can make to the bike.
A couple of things worth knowing first, because the Rail has a fit quirk:
Shock size
Your 9.8 XT runs a
230 × 57.5mm shock (RockShox Super Deluxe). Stick to that eye-to-eye and stroke and you keep the geometry and travel as Trek intended. You
can go to 230×60 or 230×62.5 to nudge rear travel up, but that changes leverage and ride height slightly, so treat it as a separate decision rather than an accident.
The clearance catch
This is the important bit.
@Doomanic — who knows the Rail platform inside out — has flagged that a
standard-body Super Deluxe coil won't clear the downtube on the M frame; the can fouls it. On mediums specifically you want either a Trek-specific smaller-can shock or something like an Ohlins with the figure-8 reservoir to clear. On larger frames it's usually less fraught, but worth a test-fit before you commit — and check bottle cage clearance too, as the coil body is fatter than the air can.
What riders actually run
The popular picks on the Rail thread:
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DVO Jade X (230×60) —
@Doomanic and
@nickf both run this; pairing it with a Cane Creek progressive spring is the tidy combo given the Rail's fairly linear rate.
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Marzocchi Bomber CR — good value; the stroke variants (57.5/60/65) are just an external limiter, so one shock covers your options.
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Fox DHX2 —
@zaykay reckons it's "miles better than stock, plush and responsive."
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Ohlins TTX coil —
@BiGJZ74 has confirmed it fits, and its reservoir layout helps with the clearance issue.
Spring rate
Get this right or the whole thing feels wrong. Rough starting point is your kitted riding weight and the shock's leverage ratio — most Rail owners land somewhere in the 450–550 lb/in range, but that varies with your weight and how progressive you want it. A progressive coil spring (Cane Creek/SLS) tames the linear-ish rate and stops it wallowing deep in the travel.
One honest trade-off: you're adding roughly 300–400g over the air shock, which on a 23.5kg bike nobody's going to notice on the descents.
What frame size are you on, and roughly what do you weigh kitted up? That'll let me point you at the right shock and a starting spring rate.